Fabulous again, I don't think there's one chapter I haven't loved, and it DOES just keep getting better and better- and closer and closer to Ch.17, sadly!
I really liked your characterisation of Gwen. I admit to some pretty unsubtle Gwen bashing in my writing, but I do actually prefer her to be written as at least understandable in her actions, and I think you've done good job at making her just that with Ianto's comments at the end there. I still wouldn't like to be locked in a cell with her, though!
And you're right- I never really did think Jack was extrovert. I always thought it was a front, or that some of the flirting was there to disarm people.
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I really liked your characterisation of Gwen. I admit to some pretty unsubtle Gwen bashing in my writing, but I do actually prefer her to be written as at least understandable in her actions, and I think you've done good job at making her just that with Ianto's comments at the end there. I still wouldn't like to be locked in a cell with her, though!
And you're right- I never really did think Jack was extrovert. I always thought it was a front, or that some of the flirting was there to disarm people.
Yet again, I can't wait for more!