http://chocolatenianto.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] chocolatenianto.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] soera 2010-08-14 08:27 pm (UTC)

That was a well written emotional story. The way you handled the rape and its effects was well written, it didn't show Jack as coping, but as someone needing time and help to start to deal with it with the help of Francine and Ianto.

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