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Fanfic - An Excerpt [Hawaii Five-0: Steve, Danny]
Title: An Excerpt From Got Your Back: A Study of Partnerships in Law Enforcement
Rating(s): PG
Character(s): Steve, Danny [friendship or pairing, you choose]
Summary: Check out the title. Also, the A/N.
Author's Notes: Inspired by this prompt. It's not quite an answer to the prompt - I think the prompter wanted to see the aftermath, and possibly some Steve/Danny goodness, but... this is what my brain came up with. [If I have time and inspiration, I will attempt to continue this. If not, hopefully someone else will run with it. =D]
Page layout totally inspired by my sister's numerous Psychology textbooks.
Edit to clarify: This isn't a fully-fledged work, no. It's what I immediately thought of when I read the prompt, and then I had to make it happen. Actual fic stuff - lead-in, aftermath, whatever - not here right now, just this little fragment.I'm hoping it'll go somewhere, but at the moment it's 50-50 on the odds of that happening. But even as a little taste/teaser/thing I hope y'all like it anyway. =D
Edit to the edit: There is now a proper fic for this fragment here!
Danny closed the book and slanted amused eyes at Steve, who still looked mildly shell-shocked. "You do realise, husband mine," he said, "that we will never live this down."
Rating(s): PG
Character(s): Steve, Danny [friendship or pairing, you choose]
Summary: Check out the title. Also, the A/N.
Author's Notes: Inspired by this prompt. It's not quite an answer to the prompt - I think the prompter wanted to see the aftermath, and possibly some Steve/Danny goodness, but... this is what my brain came up with. [If I have time and inspiration, I will attempt to continue this. If not, hopefully someone else will run with it. =D]
Page layout totally inspired by my sister's numerous Psychology textbooks.
Edit to clarify: This isn't a fully-fledged work, no. It's what I immediately thought of when I read the prompt, and then I had to make it happen. Actual fic stuff - lead-in, aftermath, whatever - not here right now, just this little fragment.
Edit to the edit: There is now a proper fic for this fragment here!
Danny closed the book and slanted amused eyes at Steve, who still looked mildly shell-shocked. "You do realise, husband mine," he said, "that we will never live this down."
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That said... I do know it's a fragment. It's not actually intended as a fully-fledged piece of writing; just as a tiny taste of what I'm hoping (but doubtful) will develop into a proper piece of fiction. The fault probably lies with my headers, which I now realise make it seem like this is intended as a complete piece of work. I've added an edit to the post to clarify the point, so thanks for inadvertently pointing that out to me!
All this said, I really do appreciate your taking the time out to write out such a detailed response - it's exactly the sort of comment I'd love to get on completed fics. I totally sympathise with the inability to turn your inner beta off when you read fic (Lit student here; same problem!) and I'm all in favour of such comments on other posts. If, uh, the plotbunnies ever bite. I've got my fingers crossed, anyway!
[Also, the choice of page number was completely intentional. *smirks*]
Once again, thank you for the comment - and you needn't worry, this didn't offend at all. =D