I had been wondering how you were planning on ending this story, since you said that there would be only 4 chapters of this story, and I must say I was very pleasantly surprise. You tied it all up nicely.
I wasn't a fan of Jack keeping Gray in the canon plot-line, especially since he caused the 2 (or is it 1 1/2 with Owen?) deaths in his team. So having Ianto shoot him was a bit gratifying, really. Loved the reactions of the team to Ianto's ghost (LOL to Hart shrieking, and Jack fainting. Even after Ianto told him not to :P ).
Been following this story since I saw the first part up. It's been a great time, and I hope you continue to write for Torchwood for some time more. :)
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I wasn't a fan of Jack keeping Gray in the canon plot-line, especially since he caused the 2 (or is it 1 1/2 with Owen?) deaths in his team. So having Ianto shoot him was a bit gratifying, really. Loved the reactions of the team to Ianto's ghost (LOL to Hart shrieking, and Jack fainting. Even after Ianto told him not to :P ).
Been following this story since I saw the first part up. It's been a great time, and I hope you continue to write for Torchwood for some time more. :)
Thanks for writing.