ext_242812 ([identity profile] tarnishedangel2.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] soera 2011-12-27 01:19 pm (UTC)

Hi, Soera

THANK You for writing this for me!!! : )

Rachel's teasing reference to "I Saw Mommy Kissing Santa Claus" and Danny's "playful growl" are both CUTE and amusing. I like how Danny is hesitant to explain the family Santa suit tradition because he feels it pales in comparison to Rachel's upperclass background. Little Gracie is completely ADORABLE with her blinking, shrieking, and finger chewing. : ) Rachel is amusing fighting her impulse to laugh at Grace and Danny's antics. I'm glad that she gives in to those feelings. Danny is ADORABLE playing with Gracie, and I LOVE his quote about how "mak[ing] someone happy" supercedes "pride and dignity". : ) Rachel's final observation about how lucky she is to have found Danny is wonderful too.

Excellent work on this drabble!!! : )

Take care!!! : )

Tarnished


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